When Words Don’t Love You Back (5 Minute Stand-Up R0utine)

I’ve been listening to podcasts and watching shows about comedians and how they create their acts for years, but I never thought I would have the courage to try stand-up comedy myself. But, somehow (I think black magic may have been involved,) my oh-so-persuasive friend, Genny, has talked me into doing a comedy open mic night with her next month. I came up with five minutes of material, and I would really appreciate your (constructive) criticism and suggestions before I present myself for public (in-person) ridicule. My “act,” if I can call it that, is about words and writing, and it’s called “When Words Don’t Love You Back.” I would so appreciate it if you can take a few minutes to watch it and let me know what you think.